Tuesday, August 31, 2021

Poem by: Zurielle I Wish Love Was Free (Not about me)

 I wish love was free

As free as the wind 

I wish love had no price 

As priceless as rubbish

I wish negativity cost money

As expensive as gold

I wish being useless was never a thing

Sometimes I wish this world was all a dream

I wish I could just push problems away

But they always come back like night and day

I wish I could be free 

Fly out of my cage

It's like unique is not a thing

I wish being born was a gift

But for some people it's an endless pit

I wish love was free

As free as the wind

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17 comments:

  1. Elena TerekhinaAugust 31, 2021 at 11:39 AM

    There are some really deep thoughts in your poem, Zurielle! I really enjoyed reading it!

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  2. Ms WrackAugust 31, 2021 at 11:44 AM

    Hi Zurielle,
    I really enjoyed reading your poem! I had to read it twice to really think about it. My favourite line is negativity having to cost money! Imagine a world with no negativity - WOW! Keep up the great work :-)

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    1. AnonymousNovember 24, 2021 at 11:15 AM

      Thank you Ms Wrack! I appreciate it lots!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 11:44 AM

    Wow Zurielle I love this poem you made!I read it to my brother and he loved it!!! Ka pai

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  4. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 12:14 PM

    Thank you for the positive comments!

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  5. Poto FAugust 31, 2021 at 12:25 PM

    Hi Zurielle,

    Wow! I really enjoyed your poem and just like Ms Wrack, I had to read it a couple of times slowly and really think about what you were saying. My favourite lines of this - negativity having to cost money and 'being useless never being a thing'.

    Keep up the great work!

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 9:34 PM

      faʻafetai! I really appreciate you taking your time to comment on my poem. Thank you Mrs Faalili

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  6. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 12:43 PM

    Oh my goodness Zurielle, what a wonderful poem! You are a truly gifted poet. Ka pai :)

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 9:36 PM

      Thank you Mrs Logan for your wonderful comment! I'm also not sure if I'm a poet at all. I feel like anyone could write something like this if they just felt the right thing or emotion.

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    2. Elena TerekhinaAugust 31, 2021 at 9:43 PM

      Just another evidence of your deep and critical thinking, Zurielle. Well written!

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  7. Miss ChristineAugust 31, 2021 at 1:40 PM

    Zurille, what a beautiful poem. It certainly gave me a lot to think about.

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2021 at 9:39 AM

    Hello Zurielle amamzing poem Ka Pai

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  9. UnknownSeptember 2, 2021 at 10:27 AM

    Wow Zurielle that is such a powerful poem. Your use of descriptive words is amazing.
    I look forward to more of your poem writing. Mrs Vaevae

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