RumpleStiltSkin
Once upon a time there lived a little girl who lived on a farm with her dad! One day she was spinning some straw but then the door slammed and she couldn’t get out! She thought it was her dad's fault,it’s been happening ever since her dad started talking to some other farmers.
So one day all the farmers were talking and one guy started boasting about his daughter. “My daughter is the most beautiful girl in the world” boasted the first man, then the other man said “My daughter can sing like a bird” but Maddie's father said “My daughter can spin straw?” Both of the farmers stared at Maddie's father weirdly! The father couldn’t stop himself especially when he made the worst impression of his daughter EVER! So he exaggerated “My daughter can spin straw into gold!” Both farmers were surprised and they couldn’t help but share the news!
The news was spreading so fast that in no time the king knew about it so he ordered his guards to bring the young girl to him. The king said “I have brought you here to grant me gold” “And what if I don’t your majesty?” Said Maddie then the king said”I will throw you into my deepest dungeon” Maddie couldn’t say no so she agreed to grant him gold! Maddie was devastated and scared because she couldn’t turn straw into gold! But then she heard a voice “Little girl, what will you give me if I turn straw into gold?” Maddie jumped. A strange little goblin appeared in front of her. “How can you help me?” asked Maddie. Maddie checked her pockets and she gave him some fashionable glasses and the goblin took it and whoosh there was no more straw but there was gold everywhere! The king was so happy he wanted more so he put Maddie into a bigger room with more straw and the goblin came again and the same thing happened until Maddie was put into the last and biggest room! Maddie didn’t have anything for the goblin so the goblin said “You have to promise me if you have a baby then I will get to keep that baby and Maddie said “okay” because she thought she was never going to get married until…
20 years later she was married and she was about to have a baby but then she remembered the goblin! Then the day came that she had a baby but before she could name the baby the goblin appeared and said “It is time for you to hand over the baby” Maddie cried “NO you will not take my baby” The goblin was frustrated but then he said “If you can guess my name then you can keep the baby” “How much time do I have” cried Maddie so then the goblin said “You only have three days good luck”
On the first day Maddie was so stuck that she couldn’t guess the goblins name so she only had two days left the next day Maddie secretly put a gps tracker in the goblins pocket and hears the goblin say “Hee Hee Hee tee hee hee she will never know my name is Rumpelstiltskin!” So the next day she tried to act normal and say random names until she asked “Is your name Rumpelstiltskin?” The goblin was so frustrated! He was so frustrated that when he was stomping he made a big hole through the ground and PLOP he was gone! Then Maddie had a good life wile the goblin wasn’t having much of a good time!
The End!
Fantastic effort Zurielle, you've used so many powerful words and phrases! You've included a problem, events and a resolution. I like how you used a good text model to work on and improve your writing skills. Impressive job! Ka Pai!
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