Wednesday, November 24, 2021

My story about a hamster, in a can, on the sea?!?!

 The Hamster On The Sea


Once upon a time,there was a little hamster that was sailing on the sea while she was in a...Can?? Now you might be wondering “Hm how did the Hamster even get there” But if you’re not thinking that well then...that’s ok I guess. Now back to the topic! How did the hamster get there?? Well let's go back in time and see what the hamster was doing.



3 days ago on a sunny island lived a little hamster named Zurielle! She lost her whole family and decided she had to live longer! She knew the perfect place to live which was...A PIRATES SHIP!!!! Oh wait...pirates on that island eat hamsters...which she did know and she knew it would be risky but she knew she had to go. So that night she climbed out of her leafy bed and went to the ship while the pirates were still asleep,but she then heard a noise from the back...OH NO THE CAPTAIN WOKE UP!! She knew she had to run so she ran and ran as fast as she could! She thought she wouldn’t make it because the captain was near but then she saw a rusty can and decided to jump in it to hide from the captain,and guess what?? She made it! 


So right now you might be wondering “If she made it then how did she end up on the sea??” Which I will be able to answer that question for you! So carrying on with the story, Zurielle made it! But she didn’t know the consequences she would need to face. She started to feel cold but luckily she had a furry coat that her mother made her. She wore it and she felt very warm and cozy! She slept very nicely that night! But the next night was gonna be a disaster! 


The next night came and Zurielle started to hear a storm coming so she covered the top of the can with a cloth a pirate accidentally dropped in the can! She was safe and she hadn’t got wet the whole night! But the next morning she thought it was quite sunny so she decided to wake up and relax on the sunrise completely forgetting about the pirates! But when she woke up...NO BOAT,NO PIRATES,NO ISLAND AND ONLY SEA WAS SEEN WHERE SHE WAS FLOATING!! She started to freak out! But let's just say she made it safely to another island where there were friendly animals and friendly people!


Now we actually skipped forward in time! That’s cool! But as we know this is the end of the story and I hope you enjoyed it!


1 comment:

  1. Great to see that you thought of what had happened before, during and after the moment in time captured on the picture. You created an interesting problem and showed your reader how that problem was resolved. Well done!

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