My reason why I think fireworks should be banned!
Why I think fireworks should be banned is because lots of houses have been burned down because of fireworks. Lots of people have gotten seriously injured also because of fireworks,and I know that lots of people like fireworks but what about animals? Which is a good thing to think about especially if you love your pets! You should learn to know what they like first because some animals are scared of fireworks.
I also learned that fireworks cause deadly and devastating bushfires that cause lots of animals to die and lots of nature to die too! As some people know bushfires are very dangerous at certain times so if you were to do fireworks near trees then maybe you should go away from there and move to a safer space.
In my writing I’m not trying to be rude to people that like fireworks! I’m just saying why some fireworks are dangerous in different situations. But if you use your fireworks for the right reason and the right time then there is no need to stop and ban fireworks!
What a great opinion writing Zurielle! I like how you did some research before expressing your point of view and how you posed a question about animals. It's great that you considered different situations like having fun by one group and suffering as a result of fireworks by other group of people and animals. Deep thinking, ka pai!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Elena!
ReplyDeleteI really like your reasoning Zurielle- fantastic! You've thought deeply about the issue and haven't just dismissed others who enjoy fireworks, rather you've asked them to think about animals. Tino pai!
ReplyDeleteHi Zurielle, I enjoyed your well reasoned piece of writing because it reflects your ability to think deeply about things which is a very valuable skill. Tino pai!
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