The gruffalo story

 The story I’m doing is the Gruffalo

But instead since it ended with a good ending I will end the gruffalo with a bad ending!

Here is my writing:

Once upon a time there lived a little mouse who’s name was Zurielle (I made it up because I forgot the name) and one day she went out into the woods hoping to find some dinner when she went past a log and out came a fox who looked like he found his dinner,so he asked the little mouse “Would you like to have dinner in my house” “…RIGHT” said the mouse getting an amazing idea! She might be small but she can tell very big lies which she had a very big one to tell. 

“Little mouse, would you like to come to my house for dinner??” impatiently waiting for an answer, “I am sorry but I’m going to the gruffalo’s house” said the mouse with confidence “what’s the gruffalo??”   Asked the fox, “oh well you see the gruffalo is very big and has very sharp claws big enough to slice you in half in a second...and his favourite food is fox stew” says the mouse with no hesitation “Re-really?!?! I’m sorry little mouse but I have to go before I get turned into a stew by the Gruffalo!” the mouse chuckled and soon enough she was laughing! “This would have to be the best lie I have ever told!” Laughed the mouse.

Day after day,each pest that went past the mouse ended up going back to their homes trembling in fear but the mouse? Was having an amazing time! But then one day he was quietly walking in the woods eating some delicious cheese when he saw a big monster! He thought at first it was just a reflection of something small but then the closer the creature got the bigger the shadow got which made the mouse change his mind, “I better run before I get eaten!” said the mouse in his head,but before he knew it he got caught! “What is a small mouse like you doing in the big woods?” Said a mysterious voice…

To be continued