Guess which one? Which one do you think is mine and which one do you think is the real drawing?

 

Simile poem about colours

 Poem about colours

Red as fiery as a fireplace

Orange as opalescent as the burning hot sun

Yellow as beaming as the sunlight

Green as as ablaze as a rainbow

Blue Jazzy as the sky

Purple as vivid as a flower

Pink as radiant as a shining light

                                                                                                                                                                        Grey as ashy as the ashes falling from a volcano  

                                                                                                                                                                            White as colorless as an empty world

                                                                                                                                                                          Black as bleak as the darkness                 

The gruffalo story

 The story I’m doing is the Gruffalo

But instead since it ended with a good ending I will end the gruffalo with a bad ending!

Here is my writing:

Once upon a time there lived a little mouse who’s name was Zurielle (I made it up because I forgot the name) and one day she went out into the woods hoping to find some dinner when she went past a log and out came a fox who looked like he found his dinner,so he asked the little mouse “Would you like to have dinner in my house” “…RIGHT” said the mouse getting an amazing idea! She might be small but she can tell very big lies which she had a very big one to tell. 

“Little mouse, would you like to come to my house for dinner??” impatiently waiting for an answer, “I am sorry but I’m going to the gruffalo’s house” said the mouse with confidence “what’s the gruffalo??”   Asked the fox, “oh well you see the gruffalo is very big and has very sharp claws big enough to slice you in half in a second...and his favourite food is fox stew” says the mouse with no hesitation “Re-really?!?! I’m sorry little mouse but I have to go before I get turned into a stew by the Gruffalo!” the mouse chuckled and soon enough she was laughing! “This would have to be the best lie I have ever told!” Laughed the mouse.

Day after day,each pest that went past the mouse ended up going back to their homes trembling in fear but the mouse? Was having an amazing time! But then one day he was quietly walking in the woods eating some delicious cheese when he saw a big monster! He thought at first it was just a reflection of something small but then the closer the creature got the bigger the shadow got which made the mouse change his mind, “I better run before I get eaten!” said the mouse in his head,but before he knew it he got caught! “What is a small mouse like you doing in the big woods?” Said a mysterious voice…

To be continued

My superhero writing

 My superhero writing

If I were to be a superhero I would use my powers for good! I would protect and serve people in need and people that are in danger. I would also use my powers for everyday stuff that you need to do with something else, Like if my power was fire I could just heat up anything!

But the actual power that I want is invincibility so no one can hurt me! If you don’t know what invincibility is, well it’s a power where you can never get hurt and basically no one can beat you beside telekinesis or someone that can make a black hole can beat someone with invincibility because the person with telekinesis can control you and beat you only if you somehow shake it off. The person that can make a black hole can magically put a black hole beneath you,above you and even both sides of you! If you don’t have a strategy you could be very vulnerable in that situation! 

So that’s all about me if I was a hero with superpowers!

The GTS challenge

 The GTS challenge

At my school GTS, our wonderful principals put together an amazing opportunity to get a prize!!!! They were giving out brand new stuff like chromebook and ipads which was exciting to hear.

Which brings me to now where all the GTS students are fighting to get a prize like chromebooks and ipads! Even the teachers. I am really excited but I don’t want to get my hopes up especially if I don’t get one. 

Wait... did I say chromebooks and ipads???

Why I think Fireworks should be banned

 My reason why I think fireworks should be banned!

Why I think fireworks should be banned is because lots of houses have been burned down because of fireworks. Lots of people have gotten seriously injured also because of fireworks,and I know that lots of people like fireworks but what about animals? Which is a good thing to think about especially if you love your pets! You should learn to know what they like first because some animals are scared of fireworks.

I also learned that fireworks cause deadly and devastating bushfires that cause lots of animals to die and lots of nature to die too! As some people know bushfires are very dangerous at certain times so if you were to do fireworks near trees then maybe you should go away from there and move to a safer space. 

In my writing I’m not trying to be rude to people that like fireworks! I’m just saying why some fireworks are dangerous in different situations. But if you use your fireworks for the right reason and the right time then there is no need to stop and ban fireworks!

Liana and Zurielle's Simile poem

          Teachers Simile Poem 

Ms Elena,as beautiful as a flower

Ms Elena as smart as a Kea

Mrs Logan as kind as a Matilda 

Mrs Logan as energetic as a Cheetah  

Mrs Halina as hard working as an ant

Mrs Halina as bright as gold

Mr Victor as trustable as our parents

Mr Victor as thoughtful as himself

Ms Smith as warm hearted as an animal

Ms Smith as intelligent as an Elephant

Mrs Dormell as caring as a mother

Mrs Dormell as outgoing as a student 

Mr Raj as adventurous as an explorer

Mr Raj as handsome as his dad

Mrs Faalili as humorous as a monkey

Mrs Faalili as dazzling as fireworks

All the teachers are as unique and amazing as they are!

All the teachers are as amazing as the students they teach!